Thursday, 1 December 2011

Evaluation




Hello and welcome to the official Radiohead – Nude podcast, I’m Becca Penfold, the creative director and this podcast is to allow you guys to get an inside look on the creation, concepts and behind the scenes of Nude – the album, the video, the overall promo – so I hope you enjoy!
I was really pleased with this project as a media product. I feel it not only conforms to your typical music video but it also challenges a lot of what you may expect to see from your average alternative music video. Before I made any decisions about any aspect of the video I looked at three of my favourite alternative videos that covered quite a wide spectrum of alternative music, this is because I wanted to see different interpretations of music videos of this genre – the stripped back (Johnny Cash Hurt), the theatrical (Pulp This is Hardcore) and the weird and cooky (the cure lullaby). I noticed that all videos had a darkness to them and particularly had thought about the look of the video colour-wise and concept-wise with both colour and concept linking to create a specific mood for example, Johnny Cash Hurt, the song is very emotive and talks about dark subject matters such as ‘hurting himself today’ the lighting featured a lot of shadows to reflect this gives an intense emotive mood. I used this in mine by featuring the sexy mix of black and red to touch on the, what could be seen as sexual, title ‘nude’ as well as in post production adjusting the saturation, brightness/darkness and contrast to make the visuals darker – connecting to the dark sound and content of the song, as essentially the lyrics tell you to not be too hopeful about life ‘it’s not gonna happen’.
I did however make sure to follow basic conventions of music videos that to me are vital to follow such as creating a relationship between the lyrics and the visuals. I particularly used illustrative – for example ‘now that you’ve found it’ you see an image of the girl he loves then the lyric, ‘it’s gone’ showing where she was before but is now a mess, much like the rest of his life without her. I also made sure to show a relationship between the music and the visuals because to me it’s the most important, the visuals and music must flow together. There are some illustrative examples such as I used shots of the drums quite often as the drums really stand out to me in the song and add highlights of emotion. I used the music to determine the cuts, using the rhythm, the drum beat, the odd emotive vocal to decide the timings of takes. This is most obvious in the climax of the song with the flash of memories, they fit the beat of the drum and are used to amplify the feeling. I didn’t use any contradicting visuals just because I did not want to take anything away from the artist, the song and the relationship between the song and video – I wanted them to have a very clear and pure feeling.
There are many close ups of the lead singer, Ben, as I found with the real media artefacts, the videos I had looked at before that most videos predominantly used shots of the lead singer. I did this also to promote Ben as the lead, he’s the biggest personality of the group and likes to be up front, where as members of the band such as Liam, Bass and Dom like to focus on the music more, rather than the promotion and attention. However, every member of the band does get at least one close up to show off their skill and their connection and seriousness to their music. This promotes the band to be quite sophisticated.
The notion of looking is also quite clearly present in this video through the use of the video camera – usually this notion of looking would be used voyeuristically to look at the female body but I decided to challenge what some may expect and have the notion of looking through focus on the male and his vulnerability, rather than a woman’s sexually.
There was also an intertexual reference within the video – the image of Bettie Page – this was to make a reference to her as an erotic icon which links not only to the possible sexual title of the song, the sexy yet haunting sound of the song and also links to a part of the narrative that suggests that the character is a bit of a sexual deviant – though this was meant to be subtle as it’s subtle in the song and with the digipack. The erotic theme is carried through to the advert and digipack also because the album cover – it’s a close up of Ben’s mouth and most people would agree that the mouth/lips whatever are particularly sexy feature. Also, the album cover features, pretty much, complete flesh, nudey skin tones which again add the sexy feel.
I challenged the basic ‘alternative’ video conventions as I feel most music videos do not feature narratives similar to this one, I haven’t seen many sort of psychological music videos, I’ve tried to not only make this a promotion piece for the song but what I like to see as an artistic short film with a repeatability factor.
With my digipack I did abide to many of the conventions of other digipack’s and adverts I had seen for the alternative genre. I used black and white because it is associate with the genre as alternative music is seen to be well crafted and sophisticated in comparison to other genres like pop. Black and white is classic, simple, to the point and that is what Radiohead’s music is about and the image we want to create for the band. We carried through a lot of the aspects that are in the video promo for nude, in a way I think this is challenging the conventions of music digipack’s as although often the artists video promos relate to the digipack from the albums I have looked at (such as Gorillaz) I have not seen such an obvious link than with my digipack. The images of the camera used for the back cover and the bed through the image of the camera link completely to the video as they are featured heavily in the video. This was done because as an album the themes seen in nude (transparency, invasiveness, vulnerability, erotica) also can be seen throughout the other tracks, the album, advert and video promo for nude all have links to reflect the entirety of the concept of this album that we are trying to sell – Radiohead psychologically stripped back – nude.
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I think this makes the product of both the main video and promo and the ancillary tasks very effective, as it is clear to see a link and a flow between all three video, digipack and advert. The ‘Nude’ themes mentioned before can clearly be seen in all. For example invasiveness is represented by the use of the camera throughout the music promo and digipack, it also can be seen in the advert as the album cover features a very invasive close up of Ben, the lead singer. Literal transparency can be seen on the album cover, the video shows it by looking through – the idea of being able to see right through him into his thoughts and memories (shown through the flash backs). Vulnerability is also shown through the extreme close ups on the album cover, advert and the video shows a lot of vulnerability through close ups and the narrative itself. I think the idea of the takes being slowed down also adds to seeing Ben’s vulnerability as they allow you to absorb and notice little flickers of emotion that normal speed takes couldn’t do. There is a subtle erotic theme running throughout our media artefacts as mentioned before, which I’ve touched on only slightly through all media pieces, you can see more evidence of this with the tracks ‘closer’ and ‘tempted’. In the video this can be seen though the use of the primary colours being black, red and the lighting is quite dark sexy as well as what I’ve mentioned before.
One of my favourite visual themes is the close up of Ben’s lower face which can be seen in every single media piece with the album art, the advert and also within the video during the section ‘you’ll go to hell for what your dirty mind is thinking’ a screen shot of this can be seen on the radiohead nude blog.
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The feedback I’ve had from the video has been really promising and helpful throughout the creation of the promo. A lot of it has confirmed my judgement but other audience feedback has tweaked and perfected what I wanted to achieve for this. For example, my audience feedback confirmed that the video needed to change the colours and lighting to give it a much more intense visual feel. They especially helped me with the creation of my digipack as they helped me with the images in numerous ways. First they helped me decide to use two black and white photos and two coloured but desaturated images to create a dark, edgy but sophisticated balance. The colours used can also be seen in the video and the album artwork being in colour also helped with the ‘nude’ idea, allowing the fleshy nude tones to be translated throughout all media pieces.
Someone else suggested that I should change the band image because it was too dark and the framing of all the members was unfair on Dom, the drummer as he was very hard to see. They also suggested to adjust the framing on the album art as Ben’s neck was very uneven in the original image. I retook the image of the band so that Ben was still the in front, but only slightly and the rest of the band were all equal to each other. This again shows that Ben is the front man, the personality but the fact that they are all standing together shows that they are a band and equal in creating their music. Instead of re-taking the shot of Ben I used photoshop to perfect the framing by copying the wider looking side of his neck, flipping it and then fitting it where the thinner side of Ben’s neck was. I’m really glad this was recommended by my audience as it allowed me to create an image that featured complete nude tones – perfect for an album and video promo for ‘nude’.
Without one of my focus group suggesting I used special effects to heighten the mood of parts of my video I don’t think the video would carry across the feeling it does now with them. This turned my video around as it gave the video an edge that worked well with the themes already in it – such as the vulnerability and instability of the character as the distortions of the flickers of ‘bad tv’ and ‘bad film’ create a breakdown in the visuals which represent the breakdown within the character.
One of the parts I enjoyed most about producing the video promo, digipack and advert was the use of technology. To edit and put together these pieces photoshop and final cut pro have been my holy grail. I’ve used photoshop a lot in the past so using it to create the advert and digipack was pretty simple. I also just love it for altering the colours and curves, playing with the different types of layers and changing them to ‘soft light’ and such. Also, despite finding it hard to take a perfect picture of the boys I did enjoy the challenge of editing two images together to create a great band image for the digipack. You can see screenshots of the photoshop editing on the ‘Nude’ blog.
I’d never used final cut pro before so I was a bit anxious about using it, thankfully I picked up how to use it pretty much instantly. I had used it previously on my ancillary task before when in a group be re-made the classic Britney Spears video – hit me baby one more time, but I didn’t use a lot of the features, I used it very basically by just cutting clips in and putting them together – no colour alterations, framing, slowing down, special effects but I thought it was vital to make the best of final cut and explore and experiment with the features to see if I could heighten the look and feel of the video to what I had pictured in my mind. I altered the framing to crop out and zoom in on certain shots to either focus in on the artist and also to make the shots look cleaner, simpler, more professional. I also changed the colours by desaturating the clips to give the colours a less vibrant and darker feel, this used with changing the darkness and contrast allowed the colours and lighting to have a darker, more sinister and sexy feel. Slowing down the clips not only complimented the slow pace of the music but it also was used to allow the audience to observe a more detailed view of the character and his emotions. Adding special effects such as ‘bad TV’ and ‘bad film’ really added the final touch to the music video promo. I used them mainly to highlight particular points in the music, the lyrics or the narrative. At the songs climax they are particularly used with the beat of the drum during the flash of memories – I think this worked nicely as it allows the audience to really pick up on the rhythm of the music and it links to the narrative with his memories being distorted and upsetting.
Though final cut pro and photoshop are the most obvious technology aspects of this project online mediums such as youtube, blogger and facebook have been extremely helpful in streaming the video, its progress and gaining feedback. For instance, I uploaded a near final draft of my music video to facebook see if anyone had anything to make it perfect – as it turned out people loved it. Blogger has been great to develop ideas, collect and store feedback and research, especially as you can label posts to create specific tags of areas of the project. I found this made it easier to look back on things such as my real media artefacts to build on ideas, concepts and conventions that I wanted to expand, change on or include in my video. It again helped with collecting feedback as anyone could comment on what I’ve done and make suggestions, as well as allowing me to store all my audience feedback in one tag. Youtube has also helped in terms of my research, as things like VEVO allowed me to look at official music videos of artists and analyse it deeply as being able to pause and rewind of my own accord allowed me to look at great detail and pick out the best ideas of each video, as well as allowing me to get a feel for the genre of music video.

Friday, 25 November 2011

Final draft music video promo

Final advert and digipack

I have changed the disk section slightly by lightening the image and adding the title of the album and title track 'nude' over the top, making it transparent and relating to the themes of the video and album mentioned before. I think this helps combine the image and ideas that run through the video, song, digipack and advert. I think the transparency also makes it remain looking quite simple, despite there being quite a lot going on.

Thursday, 24 November 2011

Mrs D

Well done Becca. This is very impressive. I'm pleased you retook the band image. I would urge you to consider your forth pain on your digipak and take the opportunity to show your print skills. The music promo is great. There is just one frame which isn't very clear - the white shot after the kiss - and the place towards the end where you speed the clips up could be linked to the pace of the music a little more.

Tuesday, 22 November 2011

Dolby

Becca, I think that the 'jerky' effect you've put on works well and suits the music but perhaps is a little overused and in places, especially the close-ups, it possibly takes away from the artist and emotion.

Thursday, 17 November 2011

Digipack draft



As there was not one "perfect" image of the boys I had to use photoshop to edit an image of Bass (the boy on the far left) onto the image of the rest of the boys. Luckily for me all I had to do was copy the image of Bass ontop of the other image, line up the two photos and then cut off the section of Bass overlapping Liam's arm. I then merged both images and changed the lighting and made the image black and white.

For the cover I also had to edit Ben's neck to make it more symmetrical, I also used photoshop for this and used blurring, rotating the image, copy and pasting and the "stamp" tool for this.

For the track list I simply adjusted the curves and turned the image black and white and blurred the image so that the tracks are clearer to read.

For the disk background I also used the same image I did for the tracklist, however I cropped the image so it focuses on the abstract looking picture of the bed on the screen of the camera. This links with the video due to the actual visual, the distortions featured in teh video through the jerky effects, the notion of looking through the camera and the dark, twisted nature of the song, video, album.

Original photos




Audience feedback

My audience feel that with the edits of the front cover, making Ben's neck more symmetrical and improving the framing the digipack looks a lot more sophisticated and visually pleasing. I have retaken the group shot due to feedback saying Dom is too far in the background and the lighting is too dark.
I just need to edit and add the new photo to the digipack and then it should be complete.
With my music video the audience have said they love the distorting effects and the darkness and contrast of the visuals. They particularly like the short takes near the end and like how the distortion is increased and works with the drum beat in the music to increase the emotion. They did say that there are a few too many distortions throughout so I will take some away during shots of Ben to make the focus be on him and the emotions he is portraying. I have also made sure to not put any distortions on the band (except there may be distortions in the climax of short takes due to fitting the pattern of the timings) to make sure that the band is clearly seen and recognisable throughout. I have also made sure to include closeups of all the band. Adding more of the drums due to the drums being very noticeable in the song and also due to the fact that in the full group shots he is further away, giving him more close ups makes him equally as noticeable as the others throughout the entire video.

Video draft 3

Wednesday, 9 November 2011

Mrs D

The digipak is effective and you show clear branding of your band. To improve, you need to go back to the criteria regarding print and check that you are hitting level 4. For eg you could work on the framing of the image of the band and face. The lighting is not as good as it could be in the image of the band. This is a great draft and could get you a very high grade with some more drafts and tweaks.

Tuesday, 8 November 2011

Dolby

I agree with Mrs D- a few things to work with but great foundations here.

Audience feedback - focus group

After showing my focus group the video they suggested to add some special effects on some clips to create a sense of movement and also darkness.
They also expressed that I need to slightly alter and edit clips of Ben singing because he isn't quite in time.
One person suggested that I should desaturate the colours a bit to make it look darker, which I thought was a good idea as that would also be in keeping with my digipack.

Thursday, 20 October 2011

Mrs D

Well done Becca. This is a great draft. Your mes and pace are very effective. I particularly like the use of the candle and the element of 'watching' through the camera. There are a few lip syncing issues that need tweaking and one of the first shots of Milly is a little long. Just remember that shot movement is assessed too and most of your shots are static. Keep up the good work.

Music video draft

Tuesday, 18 October 2011

Digipack draft




Advert draft




Digipack construction



Focus group - audience feedback

I showed my focus group the images and most people agreed that they preferred the shot of Ben's close up face. We also decided that black and white for the cover wasn't as effective as the coloured but slightly desaturated picture.
They also decided that a black and white picture of the band would work the best as it sets the edgy and sophisticated mood.
They also liked the idea of me using two black and white pictures and two coloured but desaturated pictures to create a balance but also a dark mood. As well as having two in focus pictures and two blurred pictures.

Filming - Day two and Editing

I had similar problems with the filming as I did on the first day of filming, I had assumed the space we had was bigger than it actually was. The backdrop I was originally going to use was made from card (I was told it was just a black backdrop) though luckily we had a larger blue backdrop as backup, however that was still quite small, though a few tweaks and crops on final cut pro should make the shots look a lot neater a more professional. At least they'll give the impression of a very intimate performance, which fits the personal aspects of the song.
The band were very cooporative and easy to direct, as well as having has learned the music for me prior to make the performance way more realistic.
Overall it was a simple day filming with the only problem being the small space.

Mrs D

These pictures look great. Try and get some audience feedback on your images. Keep up the good work.

Friday, 14 October 2011

digipack artwork images









I like the idea of having some of the images slightly blurred to give them a darker, rougher and much more emotionally raw feeling - not quite a perfect image.
The band image will not be used for the cover but will be used in the digipack. I am going to experiment with the images of the camera and Ben's face and then see which I like better.
They both relate to the video, which promotes the song, album and video. The images also relate to the album title "Nude" as the camera connotes being able to see right through someone, it can be used to analyse and look deeply at more personal sides of people. Where as the picture of Ben is very close up, showing a vulnerability and a closeness to his emotions.

Thursday, 13 October 2011

Advert 2

I much prefer the layout of this ad as well as the sizing. I've made the record lable logo smaller and on the same line as the website (also a very similar size) this is so that the lable is still being advertised but in a way that is more subtle, promoting the fact that this is the bands music and it isn't being churned out by the lable. The use of black throughout the digipack and advert also are meant to be ironic to add to the dark and twisted nature of some of the songs and tracks.

The album artwork is central to again make sure the audience pay attention to what it looks like and will keep the image in their mind for when they come to purchase it.

Mrs D

This is coming together Becca. I like the font style and colour. Layout works well - although it will be easier to provide specific feedback once the images are in. You have chosen black - are you being ironic/making a statement as the album is called nude? Make sure you know why you are making these choices and how it impacts on the promotion of the artist.

Advert one



The font is the same as that used on the album cover to again make sure they link. I think I will need to experiment with placement, sizing and of course the grey box is where the album artwork will go. I've made the artist name, album title and date of release the biggest as they are the main things I need the audience to remember for them to be able to purchase the album.

Digipack construction 3

I have decided to go back to my original idea of keeping the album name named after the main single and track I am promoting "Nude". Many artists do like to have "title tracks" for albums. For example, Pulp - This is Hardcore. I have chosen to do this as it fits into the conventions and also promotes the single as well as the album. The album artwork will also relate to the video visuals. This is because I want them all to link together to have the image of this album and tracks related very specific and iconic.

The name of the album also related to the track list as the songs will be quite stripped back, personal and dark (which relates to the colours) like "closer" for example. The simpleness of the fonts show a sophistication to the artists attitude towards the music with I found in my analysis on the digipacks with Nirvana and Gorillaz. This is also shown in the simple black and white. I also added a bonus track as I think that adds to the promotional feature, giving the audience the impression they are getting more than usual with this artist.


Tuesday, 11 October 2011

digipack construction 1

This is a very rough draft of my digipack. I still need to add images and information but I thought I should show the basic skeleton of the construction.

Record lable logo




I wanted something sophisticated and simple, yet still partcially interesting to look at. I have decided to choose the second logo on the left.

Mrs D

There are some great reflections here Becca. Well done. I look forward to seeing some rough cuts soon.

Friday, 7 October 2011

Day one of filming

I collected the camera, dolly and tripod from school before and then went to my grandad's to collect the lighting. When I got back my main girl and boy actors were waiting for me so I had to quickly set up everything.

I started with taking a few pictures for my digipack and future props for the video.

Filming was quite easy, except I did have to compromise a few shots due to needing a wider lens and filming it from a study higher angle for the establishing shots. I also found that in my sketches I have overestimated the size of my room so some of the panning shots with the dolly were hard to get smooth and navigate throughout the room.

Millie and Ben were really professional and easy to direct so I was very pleased with my casting. However, I may have to re-shoot some of the shots of Ben lip-syncing as he found it hard to grasp the lyrics. I'm excited to see some of the detailed shots of the smoke and such as I think they'll be really effective, especially with the lighting.

I need to look over all the footage but I’m confident that most of the room footage is complete. I just need to shoot a couple more shots of the room and details of the room.

Tuesday, 4 October 2011

Title font choices

I like the look of Orator STD, Courier New and Arial though I will have to experiment with these fonts with the image to see what looks best.


Thursday, 29 September 2011

Reflection of location photographs

Reflection of location photographs
After taking my own photos of the room location I feel as though I have a better idea about how it will be shot. I think that the shots will be easy to film and I like the colours, textures and tones. Particularly of that with the mess/the bed. I do think that when I film it I may use artificial lighting as I can borrow some resources from my Grandfather.

Mrs D

This is fantastic Becca. Try and get some reflect up about the pictures etc. Well done. The animatronic storyboard looks fab. There are a few shots toards the end that might be a little too quick, so when you film, make sure you film a little more than you think you might need so you have something to work with. You could also get some audience feedback on it to help you.

Wednesday, 28 September 2011

Email response

This is the response I got from XL Recordings:
Hi Becca,

Hope you're well

XL have no licensing rights for Radiohead - you will need to clear this with Warner Chappell Publishing.

Kind Regards,

Emma



So I will be sent this email to Warner Chappell Publishing:



Warner Chappell Publishing,

I am writing to you to seek permission to use the song Nude – Radiohead in my media piece, which will be a music video for that song. This will be used for my coursework and no profits will be gained from the use of this song. A video will be made and then uploaded to youtube with credits to your record company and to your artist, Radiohead. If there are any questions concerning the music video I will happily answer any.
I look forward to hearing from you,
Regards,
Becca Penfold

Advert layouts



SB with accurate timings and music

Rough timings

0-9 candle
9-44 a mix of shots showing the camera, the room, the man
44-1:05 man singing lyrics to camera
1:05-1:14 introduction of memories mixed with shots of him and the room, band
1:14-1:25 man singing to camera
1:25-3:08 memories and shots of the room, his face, him sing lyrics, band
3:08-4:06 quick edited shots of the band, the room, his face, segments of previous memories, 360's
4:06 -4:09 door opening
4:09 - END man looks up

Message to cast

Hi,
I would love for you to partake in my media video. You would be given the part of __________.
If you’re in the band it will acquire you to bring instruments. Band costume should be simple and be clothes fitting to the alternative music genre – simple jeans, trouser, slouchy.
The lead singer will need two outfits – something very slouchy and dishevelled looking and one slightly smarter. No bright colours, simple tones (mainly dark).
The female lead again will just need to wear something simple and casual in simple tones.
I will need for you to film on Sunday’s and over some weekdays which I will arrange with you all each week.
Thanks and I look forward to filming with you soon,
Becca

Didgipack layouts

CD Cover ideas - I want something simple and stripped back. Relating to the video and the song title. I like thinking about the word "nude" to be either transparent or natural. The camera has the ability to look right through people, the smoke has varieties of levels of opaqueness and transparency, the man's lips shows a vulnerability and a natural face.





Here I have played around with digipack layouts concerning the pictures as I am happy with the layout and features included.


MES - Location

Photographs
Room:
I wanted to take pictures of the room in general, testing camera angles and also experimenting will the placement of the "mess" and the textures of the room.